tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post3923404156959323156..comments2023-07-28T00:34:28.778-07:00Comments on California Imagism Gallery: Mouse's Eye ViewJohn Brantinghamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09355349090930672315noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post-958854263100165862020-04-10T16:05:09.456-07:002020-04-10T16:05:09.456-07:00I also have a poem in response to the Robert Burns...I also have a poem in response to the Robert Burns poem called "What the Mouse Said"Thomas Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13948931444778970870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post-89191258708813359542020-04-10T16:03:46.250-07:002020-04-10T16:03:46.250-07:00wee creature peek
from his crack
skitter
the floo...wee creature peek<br />from his crack<br />skitter<br /><br />the floor<br />snatch this<br />tiny treasureThomas Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13948931444778970870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post-68276111469574608292020-04-08T20:00:13.726-07:002020-04-08T20:00:13.726-07:00Nice mouse guilt Nice mouse guilt wronggurl4Uhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157386852496706334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post-69114803699912986262020-04-08T18:00:53.751-07:002020-04-08T18:00:53.751-07:00Your unfinished business is an open invitation
To ...Your unfinished business is an open invitation<br />To the cat dish and everything in the pantry.<br />You’ve had months to put up those baseboards but<br />I’m so glad you didn’t, and I hope<br />You never will.Kyle Monhollenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00446482343306462824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post-23532591801418746672020-04-08T18:00:04.001-07:002020-04-08T18:00:04.001-07:00Thank Thank wronggurl4Uhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157386852496706334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post-52213501736077163772020-04-08T17:58:47.425-07:002020-04-08T17:58:47.425-07:00Than you Esteppo and Daryl, I thoroughly enjoyed b...Than you Esteppo and Daryl, I thoroughly enjoyed both of your pieces as well. <br />Honored to have your input wronggurl4Uhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157386852496706334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post-39136315743091117032020-04-08T16:14:04.325-07:002020-04-08T16:14:04.325-07:00Beautiful image where the 2 and 4 lines
Get the fu...Beautiful image where the 2 and 4 lines<br />Get the full picture of the house mouse<br />Daryl Belcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13433464199059510165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post-10044865958980235742020-04-08T14:57:05.228-07:002020-04-08T14:57:05.228-07:00Love it! That last line is great!Love it! That last line is great!esteppbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05026912956948958863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post-18061611707426949982020-04-08T14:55:08.777-07:002020-04-08T14:55:08.777-07:00Full moon glimmering,
ascending between silver sl...Full moon glimmering, <br />ascending between silver slices<br />as the jealous house mouse <br />misses the entire pizza sky.wronggurl4Uhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157386852496706334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post-6878745583270066522020-04-08T13:41:40.997-07:002020-04-08T13:41:40.997-07:00Mouse’s Eye View
OMG another dog
Who has six?
On ...Mouse’s Eye View<br /><br />OMG another dog<br />Who has six?<br />On the bed<br />On the couch<br />On the floor<br />In and out the dog door<br />What’s a mouse to do?<br />Sneak into this bedroom<br />Cozy, dark, and OMG<br />Two cats<br />Out the laundry room<br />Into the garage<br />OMG green tree pythons<br />Waiting for a morsel of mouse<br />Think I’ll just stay outside the house.<br />OMG a 500 pound pig<br />Time to pack up<br />And check the neighbor’s digs.<br /><br />Rick Stepp-Bollingesteppbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05026912956948958863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5370002500026191812.post-88076372131101270542020-04-08T10:47:46.888-07:002020-04-08T10:47:46.888-07:00Under the hutch
there's flat sheen
Floor tile ...Under the hutch<br />there's flat sheen<br />Floor tile between<br />Me and the<br />end of the run<br />from the cat<br />I love<br />who plays <br />chase as I <br />race and run<br />to the next post<br />the refrigerator<br />and every tidbit<br /><br /><br /> Daryl Belcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13433464199059510165noreply@blogger.com