Under the hutchthere's flat sheenFloor tile betweenMe and theend of the runfrom the catI lovewho plays chase as I race and runto the next postthe refrigeratorand every tidbit
Mouse’s Eye ViewOMG another dogWho has six?On the bedOn the couchOn the floorIn and out the dog doorWhat’s a mouse to do?Sneak into this bedroomCozy, dark, and OMGTwo catsOut the laundry roomInto the garageOMG green tree pythonsWaiting for a morsel of mouseThink I’ll just stay outside the house.OMG a 500 pound pigTime to pack upAnd check the neighbor’s digs.Rick Stepp-Bolling
Full moon glimmering, ascending between silver slicesas the jealous house mouse misses the entire pizza sky.
Love it! That last line is great!
Beautiful image where the 2 and 4 linesGet the full picture of the house mouse
Than you Esteppo and Daryl, I thoroughly enjoyed both of your pieces as well. Honored to have your input
Your unfinished business is an open invitationTo the cat dish and everything in the pantry.You’ve had months to put up those baseboards butI’m so glad you didn’t, and I hopeYou never will.
Nice mouse guilt
wee creature peekfrom his crackskitterthe floorsnatch thistiny treasure
I also have a poem in response to the Robert Burns poem called "What the Mouse Said"